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She put a blanket over a rotting corpse of a story.įrom an editor's perspective, the rapid POV jump and some of these sentences. She might as well have faded to black on the SA instead of removing it entirely, that's how bad it looks.

There was so many scenes of abuse, stalking, SA, and attempted murder she didn't edit out.

While I got the version without the sexual assault scene(the one she edited out so it's 'more romantic', there was too much of "lemme guess the colour of your panties" creepiness and also having sex with "just like a sister" and dead family member mishandling. The purity culture goes so strong that not even the law can stop it! So the big twist is basically stalking and abusing and almost killing someone is okay because if you give your virginity to the entire reason for your horrible scars and trauma, he's still the one.